17 December, 2010

55 Fiction


I stood there, with no scope of movement.

“Did you do it?” he asked.

“I guess” she said.

“Guesses? They barely work for me girl!”

“It was difficult, I tried but..”

A bullet passed through her chest. Blood splattered. She lay cold. He stared at the cold body and turned.



Death waited for me.



PS: My very first attempt @ 55 Fiction !

5 comments:

Utkarsh said...

keep goin..

Satans Darling™ said...

Good work babe :) but I got a little confused? "her" and "I" are the same person right? I am sorry :P Call me dumb :P

:: Pearly :: said...

i and her are different people! :D
hehe..!

CRD said...

good job. ive wanted to try something like this. maybe i'll give it a try one of these days..

Do visit mine..

Cheers
CRD

phatichar said...

An 'out-of-body' experience this?? :)

Nice..could be interpreted in several ways. My confusion is not with 'I' and 'her', it's more with 'I' and the 'he' in the end. I guess that's confusing. But nonetheless..great effort. Kudos. :)