BLISSIMISTIC

Had written this when I felt like its been ages since I smiled. Just thought of a few things I like.. a few things I appreciate and a few observations that makes my mind smile and felt like penning them down.. it doesnt take much to be happy! :-)



How often do we observe,

Idyllic green curves.

Magnificence of nature,

Weird creatures.

Our panoramic view

Makes us feel we have but few

Often we forget,

Our minds happy even by a miniscule!

Fragrance of fresh flowers,

Aroma after morning showers,

Smell of the wet ground,

Listening to the heart beats pound.

A pup struggling to climb a step,

Or searching a bead in a room unkempt,

An ant trying to find its way,

On tiles that all look the same.

Looking for a friend in utter mayhem,

Or walking with them in complete rhythm,

Singing favorite songs together,

Or humming tunes totally muddled.

Though not a shriek of joy,

The soul’s gratified.

Happiness is something one discovers,

With time that passes by.

Comments

Very very true! And a very well written poem :)
^_^ SENO ^_^ said…
What are you talking about :-?? LOL=)) :-j


On a serious note...itz good!! :)
Rohit Gore said…
This was a lovely poem. You have created some vivid images that are so much part of everyone's shared memories. You have a fantastic ability to convey one single thought in so many different ways. I am always wary of poems that pound on a single thought...but this one was done very well. Please keep writing...

Rohit
An ant trying to find its way,

On tiles that all look the same.

Looking for a friend in utter mayhem,

Or walking with them in complete rhythm
well composed
Regards
Miss Cynical said…
thank you guys.. :-)
Karan said…
lovely post... :) ... life indeed is all about seeking happiness in little things which we tend to ignore in our constant running around...

and a nice blog... lots of little n nice things pooled in...

had a look at ur recent post (12th march..).. good luck fr ur exams... n mayb u shud try reading this post of urs agen...

stay happy.. keep working.. it would pay off.. sooner rathr than later...

Cheers... :)

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